So, I want to write this fic.

[blue_soaring]

We went to the Cactus Club last night to celebrate my quarter-centennial. And sorta like Jared, the only thing I can think is hey, I can rent a car on my own now, SCORE.

But, see. The Club. Has the bestest bathrooms ever. Like, seriously. I know you people down in LA or whatever are going to scoff at the awesomeness of the Club's bathrooms, but. There are leather couches and LCD televisions set into the walls, the stalls are like, five by five with floor to ceiling clouded glass walls that are freakin' backlit, so if someone is only a couple of inches from the glass, you can see their shadow.

These bathrooms? Were made to have sex in.

And I sorta kinda maybe really like burning want to write a fic where Jared has Jensen shoved up against the inside of one of those stalls and is just going to town on him.

Yeah.

[edit] Aha. 2k in. Anybody want to offer themselves up as a beta? XD

Comments

[nekofreak.insanejournal.com]

hehe you are so cute! *squish*

reno says that rufus has even posher bathrooms than that ^_~

[blue_soaring.insanejournal.com]

Well, of course Rufus does. But that's par of the course. And I've never peed in Rufus's bathroom, so. XD

[nekofreak.insanejournal.com]

poor reno, he feels the need to snark because he feels abandoned. poor thing ^_~

[toxictattoo.insanejournal.com]

And I sorta kinda maybe really like burning want to write a fic where Jared has Jensen shoved up against the inside of one of those stalls and is just going to town on him.

[encourages this further]

[blue_soaring.insanejournal.com]

Man, I know, right? Right? But I feel like I want plot or something involved, and that'll take awhile to come up with, whereas the burning need kinda demands the porn now.

I'm torn. D:

[stormcloude.insanejournal.com]

There's always that (semi) plot about getting caught somewhere that we were talking about before...

*halo*

[iniq.insanejournal.com]

You should write it, then. Because you know you can already feel it... feel the music in the background pound in your ears. >:3 And the sound - that thump - Jensen's back makes when it gets pushed against the wall of that stall wall.

=D

[zoerayne.insanejournal.com]

And I sorta kinda maybe really like burning want to write a fic where Jared has Jensen shoved up against the inside of one of those stalls and is just going to town on him.

I sorta kinda maybe really like burning want you to. Yes.

[mmariep2.insanejournal.com]

Write it, write it, write it.

[prettyfreckles.insanejournal.com]

yah.

jensen cottaging jared. ooh.

gotta be cleaner than the graveyard... !

[okaasan59.insanejournal.com]

Wow. Now I want to have sex in that bathroom...

[haraamis.insanejournal.com]

God, me too. *_*

Also, happy belated b-day, Blue. ♥!

I'm sorry I'm late, but first I didn't have internet and then other things happened...

You know, I'm not sure I ever told you that, but you were my first real fandom friend, the first person I had met through fandom and started talking to on a regular basis. *grin* Ah, the memories...

[dragyn.insanejournal.com]

These bathrooms? Were made to have sex in.

I think you're right. As in really. Because yeah. Wow. 0.0

It could be a first-time fic, you know? I mean, can you imagine? The two of them a little drunk, Jared being a little pushy, Jen being a little pliable, both secretly wanting it too much to not take advantage of the 'atmosphere'. ;D

[asieluniversity.insanejournal.com]

I think you should write it, yes. A lot. And I'm totally willing to beta if you still need one. However, I lack self-confidence in my beta skills to say more than that.

[rens_sanctuary.insanejournal.com]

I offer to beta. Yes I do. -Is going to Hell under the sheer weight of the madness that is 2K wordage and does not care.-

Beta

[mischief.insanejournal.com]

Sure, I'll beta anyone who asks!

On another note, anything new between you and your evil twin regarding ff7?

Re: Beta

[blue_soaring.insanejournal.com]

Heh, then I'll take you up on that this weekend. Finishing up the raw copy right now--I usually get a beta to look it over before I even reread it once, just to put some time/distance between me and it. Send me an email so I have your addy to forward the word doc to?

Pond's starting on the next fic in our Guns 'verse, I think. It's her turn, anyways. :D

Re: Beta

[mischief.insanejournal.com]

w2dasher@yahoo.com

I have a tendency to fix spelling and grammar mistakes that I see. It depends on the raw version. If it needs more work work, I'll probably send it back with notes via word note.

[(Anonymous)]

I just stumbled onto this fic by following a fic rec on someone's journal, I think it was for best fic of J2 where Jensen wears Jared's clothes, if you can believe it.

Wow, your dialogue in this is terrific. You have a good ear for mimicing the natural cadence and playfulness we've seen between both of them in interviews, DVD extras, and stuff.

I also liked how you didn't just jump in, but built the relationship up gradually starting with the pilot and moving throughout the season. Jared's playful and good naturedly persistant and slowly making Jensen more comfortable and winning him over. You can see their relationship get closer and build until the end scene. It made the end scene feel like it was apart of a bigger relationship and not just sex.

And the little notes about Vancouver are spot on, you really nailed the city and Burnaby with the little grace notes you wove in. Neat little detail oriented things.

Write more, please!

--sierraindigo