I just stumbled onto this fic by following a fic rec on someone's journal, I think it was for best fic of J2 where Jensen wears Jared's clothes, if you can believe it.
Wow, your dialogue in this is terrific. You have a good ear for mimicing the natural cadence and playfulness we've seen between both of them in interviews, DVD extras, and stuff.
I also liked how you didn't just jump in, but built the relationship up gradually starting with the pilot and moving throughout the season. Jared's playful and good naturedly persistant and slowly making Jensen more comfortable and winning him over. You can see their relationship get closer and build until the end scene. It made the end scene feel like it was apart of a bigger relationship and not just sex.
And the little notes about Vancouver are spot on, you really nailed the city and Burnaby with the little grace notes you wove in. Neat little detail oriented things.
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Date: 2007-10-19 02:49 am (UTC)Wow, your dialogue in this is terrific. You have a good ear for mimicing the natural cadence and playfulness we've seen between both of them in interviews, DVD extras, and stuff.
I also liked how you didn't just jump in, but built the relationship up gradually starting with the pilot and moving throughout the season. Jared's playful and good naturedly persistant and slowly making Jensen more comfortable and winning him over. You can see their relationship get closer and build until the end scene. It made the end scene feel like it was apart of a bigger relationship and not just sex.
And the little notes about Vancouver are spot on, you really nailed the city and Burnaby with the little grace notes you wove in. Neat little detail oriented things.
Write more, please!
--sierraindigo