I am just going to linger on that mental image for a while. Mmmm.
I want to give an unconditional yes, but there are two things I feel like I should tell you first: 1. I'm a totally self-taught, gut-instinct writer who says vague things like "this paragraph breaks the flow because it pulls the reader's focus over here instead of keeping it with this character's experience" and 2. I am actually a prude. This could make it very hard for me to beta. I am absolutely willing to give it a try, though! If you still want to give it a go, my email is my username at gmail. ♥ eeee so excited omg
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Date: 2009-12-15 10:12 pm (UTC)I want to give an unconditional yes, but there are two things I feel like I should tell you first: 1. I'm a totally self-taught, gut-instinct writer who says vague things like "this paragraph breaks the flow because it pulls the reader's focus over here instead of keeping it with this character's experience" and 2. I am actually a prude. This could make it very hard for me to beta. I am absolutely willing to give it a try, though! If you still want to give it a go, my email is my username at gmail. ♥ eeee so excited omg
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Date: 2009-12-15 10:20 pm (UTC)2. Shockingly, there is no actual porn. Somehow, it is still kinda dirty-feeling.
Finishing up my quickie second pass, will bombard you shortly! :D