I'd be glad to give it a shot! Or if my comments aren't quite what you're looking for, then I've done the some of the rough work and you can give it to Pond for fine-tuning. :)
Woo! You have a choice between casefile hijinks and Serious Business. Serious Business is the one I'll send if you don't have a preference, since it's the one I'm anxious for and it's shorter.
Well. Pond usually just directly edits typos and small changes (like periods, commas, that sort of thing) and sticks bigger changes between [] square brackets so I can just search through to poke at her suggestions. Heh.
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Date: 2009-02-23 08:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-02-23 08:17 pm (UTC)Exciting, new input. :D
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Date: 2009-02-23 08:26 pm (UTC)How do you normally prefer notes? Annotated Word doc files? Shared Google docs? A separate list?
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Date: 2009-02-23 08:32 pm (UTC)Where do I send my hopefully-tasties?
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Date: 2009-02-23 08:34 pm (UTC)Works for me! stormcloude ( at ) gmail.com