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Hands and Mouth
Supernatural. Sam/Dean. R. 200 words. For [insanejournal.com profile] supernatural100's prompt 'cut' (22). 4.14 coda.
Dean is all the things his hands do.

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Hands and Mouth


Bobby offers to stay and Sam says, "No, s'okay. We're okay," and they get a room outside town where no one looks twice at bruised knuckles and bruised faces and the bruised heart Dean wears on his sleeve.

Sam meant what he said but didn't mean what Dean heard. Twice he tries to tell Dean; twice Dean doesn't listen. Talk is cheap, easy, lies spill out of their mouths every day, more and more. Dean's baby brother would find a better way than revenge carved too late from the backs of those he doesn't try to save.

When Dean's hands are on his skin Dean's eyes are everywhere he doesn't want them to be. Years have taught that Dean is all the things his hands do while his mouth lies and cheats and haemorrhages honesty in the lines between.

As glaring daylight fades he holds Sam in hands that have bled bodies and soul. His apology is his mouth to the raw slice on Sam's throat. He needs and Sam gives because one of them has to shoulder the blame for this.

So Sam turns into the things his brother is and trusts in the darkness to keep them safe.

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End

Date: 2009-02-09 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ponderosa121.insanejournal.com
I adore the language in this, just so you know. :3

Date: 2009-02-10 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue_soaring.insanejournal.com
Wee! So, you'll forgive me when I do it for the next one?

Date: 2009-02-09 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.insanejournal.com
They're so not okay, it's great to watch. Especially when Sam knows Dean so well, he can tell exactly when the lies shine through and where the truth can be seen.

Bruised heart on his sleeve. You rock beautiful phrases in this one.

Date: 2009-02-10 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue_soaring.insanejournal.com
I really wasn't going to post it, because it felt like the words were... overcharged. But then the evil twin reminded me of the Uriel ficlet she had and without thinking, I did the whole,'You post yours, I'll post mine!' bit.

Only after did I realise that meant I had to post.

Thankie for the ego cookie. <3 Next, casefic!

Date: 2009-02-09 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orehime.insanejournal.com
Waaah! You make me want to cling to them and make it all better...

Date: 2009-02-10 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue_soaring.insanejournal.com
It'll get better! This is what I keep telling myself about Show--conflict, strife, is good. That means there's something to come back from.

MAKE THEM COME BACK SOON, KRIPKE.

Thanks! :D

Date: 2009-02-11 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabeth_fics.insanejournal.com
I'm in ridiculous awe of your language all the time. :D You always surprise and amaze me with the phrases you come up with, and after having read your replies to other people, I have to agree that I'm glad you decided to post and that it was worth posting. :D

Date: 2009-02-11 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue_soaring.insanejournal.com
It's kinda hilarious, that's how I feel about most of my favourite works by others. I have to keep a mind to certain key phrases I keep using (that the evil twin bonks me for) and mix it up more. Hopefully, I did that here! :D

Thanks so much! Ego cookies always serve me well. :3

Date: 2009-02-11 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabeth_fics.insanejournal.com
Maybe because the evil twin bonks you for them, but I haven't noticed you re-using phrases. :D

I need to figure out how to watch your journal as an RSS feed so that I can see when you update. :/

Date: 2009-02-11 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue_soaring.insanejournal.com
http://blue-soaring.insanejournal.com/data/rss/

You should be able to something with that. :3

Date: 2009-02-11 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragyn.insanejournal.com
So poignant, I love this!

Date: 2009-02-11 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue_soaring.insanejournal.com
Hey you! :D Thankie, thankie. I'm sorta glad Pond tricked me into posting now. XD

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