I love it that Jensen gets confused. And calls Jared a bitch – Dean’s word for Sam. He’s still trying to stay on top of this, and he’s slowly drowning in it, but for some reason, can’t resist and really doesn’t want to.
Jensen's heart kicks viciously against his ribs, his lips already thick, tingling. I totally love this imagery.
Jared prefers to take the lead, lick his way into Jensen's mouth like he's convincing Jensen to give up something, like kissing Jared is on some secret list of things the universe has decided Jensen Ross Ackles should never, ever do. Oh yeah. Exactly.
He swallows down the noises Jared makes like they're cold, clear water and he's dying of thirst. This is the way it always goes, Jared's tongue in his mouth and his hands on Jared's dick through layers of cotton until Jared's shaking and moaning and coming. And then, when he's blissed out on sex, Jensen rutting against his hip like a teenager until they're both breathless and sticky. This is so real, I swear I can hear them. More sticky yum...
Rough, clumsy tugs that state clear as day Jared's never made a habit of fucking around with guys and that bring Jensen off faster than he's shot a load since high school. The very fact that this sentence sounds awkward is what makes it *work.* You are awesome.
Hey... don’t forget the sequel. I wanna know what happens when they get back to whomever’s apartment…. :D
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Date: 2007-10-09 02:33 am (UTC)I love it that Jensen gets confused. And calls Jared a bitch – Dean’s word for Sam. He’s still trying to stay on top of this, and he’s slowly drowning in it, but for some reason, can’t resist and really doesn’t want to.
I totally love this imagery.
Oh yeah. Exactly.
This is so real, I swear I can hear them. More sticky yum...
The very fact that this sentence sounds awkward is what makes it *work.* You are awesome.
Hey... don’t forget the sequel. I wanna know what happens when they get back to whomever’s apartment…. :D