Oh...! I had tears in my eyes at the end. I haven't read a lot of things like this, and so I spent a lot of this thinking about how different the dynamic is from Stranger Things Never Changed My Mind and how telling it is and how much I really, really LIKE IT. They're so vulnerable and desperate here, especially in "Let me in, Frank, you fucking shit. Fucker, let me in." and "I liked you wanting me that bad," and jesus it's so raw and fucking hot and I almost feel like I'm intruding reading it and I like that too.
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Date: 2011-11-02 04:20 am (UTC)[/incoherent flailing]