you make me incoherent! but okay, I will attempt a comment.
OMG, nobody does dirty talk like you. Tommy's got a FILTHY mouth, and it's totally over the top porno talk, but it still sounds like him, and I LOVE Adam's reactions to it. because srsly, how can you NOT react to that shit. and even TOMMY reacts to what he's saying, talking shit and making stuff up and spitting out ideas as they come to him, it's so great. also, Adam knowing it was Tommy's first time. <3____<3 BOYS. and I think my reaction to the Catholic school uniform was similar to Adam's. FUCKING HOT. and fucking in a CHURCH, and in an ALLEY, and in a PUBLIC BATHROOM, and almost in a LIMO WITH OTHER PEOPLE, and then the utter sweetness of the awful by-the-hour hotel room, OMG, ADAM, you total sweetheart. and he was going broke paying for Tommy! my comment has devolved into rambling, I'm sorry. BUT I LOVED THIS. and wow, you really kick it off with porn and DON'T EVER STOP, I like that. somehow you managed to get plot in there, which is amazing, considering ALL THE PORN. :P
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Date: 2011-07-14 04:53 am (UTC)OMG, nobody does dirty talk like you. Tommy's got a FILTHY mouth, and it's totally over the top porno talk, but it still sounds like him, and I LOVE Adam's reactions to it. because srsly, how can you NOT react to that shit. and even TOMMY reacts to what he's saying, talking shit and making stuff up and spitting out ideas as they come to him, it's so great. also, Adam knowing it was Tommy's first time. <3____<3 BOYS. and I think my reaction to the Catholic school uniform was similar to Adam's. FUCKING HOT. and fucking in a CHURCH, and in an ALLEY, and in a PUBLIC BATHROOM, and almost in a LIMO WITH OTHER PEOPLE, and then the utter sweetness of the awful by-the-hour hotel room, OMG, ADAM, you total sweetheart. and he was going broke paying for Tommy! my comment has devolved into rambling, I'm sorry. BUT I LOVED THIS. and wow, you really kick it off with porn and DON'T EVER STOP, I like that. somehow you managed to get plot in there, which is amazing, considering ALL THE PORN. :P