Woo, I'm so glad you enjoyed! It was so much fun writing the build up to sex and then backing off, it made for a really different rhythm to a fic than I'm used to, since I'm all about the payoff and happy orgasm times. I see some more delicious UST in my future, I do.
Thanks for pointing those two things out, I appreciate it! I'm going to have to go with they're not errors or typos this time, but stylistic choices. Grammatically they're both correct, especially the dialogue where rules are even looser. I'm sorry they didn't work for you, and if they made you stumble while you were reading, though.
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Date: 2011-06-22 12:57 am (UTC)Thanks for pointing those two things out, I appreciate it! I'm going to have to go with they're not errors or typos this time, but stylistic choices. Grammatically they're both correct, especially the dialogue where rules are even looser. I'm sorry they didn't work for you, and if they made you stumble while you were reading, though.