y'know, I am really loving the ADOMMY-Neil storylines. . . Neil is a wonderful balance to Adam/Tommy and their 'wicked ways'! LOL!
This story made me laugh. . . made me cringe. . . it managed to balance hot/sex with funny internal dialogue by the characters--I especially liked Neil trying to ignore, and comprehend, what the hell was going on. . . the fact that it was HIS birthday just added to the fun!!
You managed to capture the Tommy that the Glamily so love. . the rascal. . the teaser. . all the while being a great mix of sexuality . . . who else could enjoy a T/A show while sitting on Adam's 'package' . . . LOL! quite a picture I have in my head . . . one that will be hard to explain when someone asks me what I'm thinking about as I smile to myself!!
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branchandroot
LOVED IT!
Date: 2011-06-05 12:38 pm (UTC)This story made me laugh. . . made me cringe. . . it managed to balance hot/sex with funny internal dialogue by the characters--I especially liked Neil trying to ignore, and comprehend, what the hell was going on. . . the fact that it was HIS birthday just added to the fun!!
You managed to capture the Tommy that the Glamily so love. . the rascal. . the teaser. . all the while being a great mix of sexuality . . . who else could enjoy a T/A show while sitting on Adam's 'package' . . . LOL! quite a picture I have in my head . . . one that will be hard to explain when someone asks me what I'm thinking about as I smile to myself!!
Amazing. . .*kiss*
Janshawaii