Thank you so much! And thanks for pointing out the typo, those are always so pesky.
Regarding your thought about highway vs. autobahn, this is one of the situations where you as a writer could go with a familiar, comfortable metaphor, or you could stretch out and find one that suits your purpose just as well. In this case, the autobahn is in my feeling a better metaphor, since a notion that generally hits people when they think of the autobahn is NO SPEED LIMITS OMG. The fact that Tommy is American-from-America should in no way limit the world of simile and metaphor. :3
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Date: 2011-05-23 04:12 pm (UTC)Regarding your thought about highway vs. autobahn, this is one of the situations where you as a writer could go with a familiar, comfortable metaphor, or you could stretch out and find one that suits your purpose just as well. In this case, the autobahn is in my feeling a better metaphor, since a notion that generally hits people when they think of the autobahn is NO SPEED LIMITS OMG. The fact that Tommy is American-from-America should in no way limit the world of simile and metaphor. :3