Gorgeous stuff! I loved the original verse of this so much, so I squee'd like a little girl when I saw you had written more of this world. From the first images of Tommy relaxing in the sun on the dusty porch and Adam in just a pair of battered jeans and no shirt(UNF), right on through them sprawled on the ground at the end, this was picture perfect! The trust and affection given and received during the shaving, the forbidden thrill of exposing themselves outside, the heat of the frottage - nnnnngggghhhh, I loved every word.
The heavy thud of Tommy's heart refuses to slow. It's a good life he's stumbled upon here in Adam's town, in Adam's arms. A damn good life he wants so badly to hold fast. Hell, yeah - a damn good life! <3
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Date: 2011-05-07 06:59 pm (UTC)The heavy thud of Tommy's heart refuses to slow. It's a good life he's stumbled upon here in Adam's town, in Adam's arms. A damn good life he wants so badly to hold fast. Hell, yeah - a damn good life! <3