Omgggggg I think this has just become my new favorite fic of yours. I LOVE dubcon/noncon fantasies, when they're done well, and this very definitely is done well. The whole beginning, I kept thinking how much of it is planned, how much of everything they do is scripted, and I had NO IDEA what was actually going to happen. SO MUCH DELICIOUS TENSION. And it was so great to see that Tommy really did leave the house, that that wasn't part of the plan. And then the wine, that was such a perfect way to go, because of course Tommy would drink wine, and of course he wouldn't expect it to be drugged (in their fantasy world), and I loved the buildup to them actually saying the wine was drugged. And at the end! Tommy worried that Adam wouldn't be able to hurt him for real! SO MUCH LOVE. And fucking hot that they recorded it, too.
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Date: 2011-04-13 01:12 am (UTC)