Actual non-con makes me uncomfortable, however, this is very hot. I like knowing that there's an understanding of consent between the two, regardless of what's being played out in the action.
Also I have to say that I really like how you always make clear what both parties are getting out of something. It usually upsets me a little when I can't tell what the sub is actually getting out of it. I like to see both parties enjoying themselves. I know it's a little different here, what with this being a RAPE fantasy, but I really liked that you had Tommy fall out of the role at the end there, and that you had that really sweet post-game affection.
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Date: 2011-04-12 08:44 pm (UTC)Actual non-con makes me uncomfortable, however, this is very hot. I like knowing that there's an understanding of consent between the two, regardless of what's being played out in the action.
Also I have to say that I really like how you always make clear what both parties are getting out of something. It usually upsets me a little when I can't tell what the sub is actually getting out of it. I like to see both parties enjoying themselves. I know it's a little different here, what with this being a RAPE fantasy, but I really liked that you had Tommy fall out of the role at the end there, and that you had that really sweet post-game affection.
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