Date: 2011-03-27 09:57 pm (UTC)
I love these lines:

Tommy slants him a sideways glance. "You flirted."

"I always flirt. Flirting is harmless."

"While he was sticking you with a needle."

I can totally see Adam saying this! And this:

"Tommy tastes like Starbucks and Gummi Bears, a plastic sweetness that brings Adam back to endless nights on American highways, tires rolling smoothly over asphalt as Tommy curled up sleepily in his bed sharing kisses that were never meant to lead to things like their bed."

Awww, I love it! Your writing is beautiful, and your characters are so believable. This was sweet, yet so filthy. Wonderful! <33





If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org

Profile

blue_soaring: (Default)
ace of spades
Page generated Jul. 14th, 2025 11:12 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags

December 2019

S M T W T F S
1234567
89 1011121314
15161718192021
22232425262728
293031    

Tags