so this is EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED PLUS THEIR ASSBABIES and you've totally made my year and I hereby declare you CULT LEADER OF ALL THE FANFICS
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I just love how you approach things, because in my head your Tommy voice is SPOT ON WITH PUNK SPRINKLES, and you have this amazing way of conveying Adam's personality that is, like, TOMMY GETS HIM AND THE READER GETS HIM but we're not being overloaded with Adampeen-sized introspection, you just trust the reader to GET IT. I think that's the mark of a brilliant writer, because you're not spelling everything out for us and thus allow readers to have their own little ~space within the reading. /ramblemeister
MY FAVORITE THING EVER IN THE UNIVERSE: "Yeah," Adam says, soft and dangerous, "and I want to go back there and punch every last one of his fucking teeth out of his worthless head. He didn't fucking deserve what you gave him. I want him off you."
I was ♥_♥ and JIZZING MY SQUEE and it was GLORIOUS. It's like a perfect capture of the protective-possessive part of Adam's personality, which Tommy obviously loves even if he'll deny it, and I want to squish that moment to my fuzzy heart and COO AT IT FOREVER, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME WOMAN.
I also loved that you didn't really go all CROCODILE EMO TEARS about Tommy's poor choice in the ass-virginity department. It's one of the many OMG SO MANY reasons I was ecstatic when you agreed to do this prompt, because you handle that shit so matter-of-factly, it is EXACTLY what I wanted.
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Date: 2011-03-05 11:44 pm (UTC)♥ ♥ ♥
I just love how you approach things, because in my head your Tommy voice is SPOT ON WITH PUNK SPRINKLES, and you have this amazing way of conveying Adam's personality that is, like, TOMMY GETS HIM AND THE READER GETS HIM but we're not being overloaded with Adampeen-sized introspection, you just trust the reader to GET IT. I think that's the mark of a brilliant writer, because you're not spelling everything out for us and thus allow readers to have their own little ~space within the reading. /ramblemeister
MY FAVORITE THING EVER IN THE UNIVERSE:
"Yeah," Adam says, soft and dangerous, "and I want to go back there and punch every last one of his fucking teeth out of his worthless head. He didn't fucking deserve what you gave him. I want him off you."
I was ♥_♥ and JIZZING MY SQUEE and it was GLORIOUS. It's like a perfect capture of the protective-possessive part of Adam's personality,
which Tommy obviously loves even if he'll deny it, and I want to squish that moment to my fuzzy heart and COO AT IT FOREVER, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME WOMAN.I also loved that you didn't really go all CROCODILE EMO TEARS about Tommy's poor choice in the ass-virginity department. It's one of the
many OMG SO MANYreasons I was ecstatic when you agreed to do this prompt, because you handle that shit so matter-of-factly, it is EXACTLY what I wanted.SO I KINDA LIKE THIS FIC.