As always your dialogue -among other things- just blows me away.
"What I'm fucking saying," Tommy stresses, shaking wet hair back out of his eyes, "and what I've been fucking saying, is I didn't plan on it, okay? It happened. He wasn't like the assfucking messiah or some shit, but I'm not traumatised either. Jesus, Adam."
Just one of many examples. Rhythmic, real and smart. This is how they talk. I'm sure of it. Thanks for another great read! Viv
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Date: 2011-03-05 11:06 pm (UTC)"What I'm fucking saying," Tommy stresses, shaking wet hair back out of his eyes, "and what I've been fucking saying, is I didn't plan on it, okay? It happened. He wasn't like the assfucking messiah or some shit, but I'm not traumatised either. Jesus, Adam."
Just one of many examples. Rhythmic, real and smart. This is how they talk. I'm sure of it. Thanks for another great read!
Viv