Oh this was so gorgeous! I LOVE Western based stories with a modern twist and this fit the bill. Tommy's character was so endearing. I'm glad he found peace so he didn't have to continue to run. He was a little tough guy because he had to be but Adam brought out his true sweetness. Adam's easy smile brightened up the story and set the stage for the peacefulness of his town.
Everything about this story felt real and I could picture it all...the dust cloud that signified trouble, the tasty meals Lisa made, the sexual tension between Adam and Tommy, the injuries from the gunshots.
You're an amazing writer and I love all your stories so much!
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Date: 2011-02-27 04:54 am (UTC)Everything about this story felt real and I could picture it all...the dust cloud that signified trouble, the tasty meals Lisa made, the sexual tension between Adam and Tommy, the injuries from the gunshots.
You're an amazing writer and I love all your stories so much!