I don't like vampire fics, they're just not my thing. BUT, your word usage in this story is unbelievably amazing!! The way you set up the story, your descriptions, the believable (humorous in Neil's case) character dialogue...is just outstanding!! I can't even tell you my favorite lines, there are too many! I'm glad I didn't notice the VAMPIRES in the heading because I wouldn't have read it, and would have missed out on something truly special! :)
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Date: 2010-10-27 10:08 pm (UTC)