Oh my goodness! This is the crackiest crackfic that ever cracked, and yet...
I could not turn away. And it wasn't because it was lulzy, it was because it made me feel, and think and care! (There were parts where I was practically reading through my fingers saying "Where is she going with this? Where is she going with this? OMG, where is she going with this?! :-) )
I love the way you write Tommy. He's not the most cerebral dude in the world, but he still manages to get everything right. I literally chortled aloud at this: Adam made a startled noise in Tommy's mouth. Tommy ignored it, blocking Adam's attempts to pull back, and then, once he got his hand inside Adam's pants, said, "Oh."
"No pulse," Adam said, and seriously, he really had to move on. Tommy was so over it.
I could quote a zillion other lines too, but man, you not only can write, you are a great storyteller as well!
If I were one of the cool kids with a DW acct I'd memory this like whoa!
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Date: 2010-10-19 03:33 am (UTC)I could not turn away. And it wasn't because it was lulzy, it was because it made me feel, and think and care! (There were parts where I was practically reading through my fingers saying "Where is she going with this? Where is she going with this? OMG, where is she going with this?! :-) )
I love the way you write Tommy. He's not the most cerebral dude in the world, but he still manages to get everything right. I literally chortled aloud at this: Adam made a startled noise in Tommy's mouth. Tommy ignored it, blocking Adam's attempts to pull back, and then, once he got his hand inside Adam's pants, said, "Oh."
"No pulse," Adam said, and seriously, he really had to move on. Tommy was so over it.
I could quote a zillion other lines too, but man, you not only can write, you are a great storyteller as well!
If I were one of the cool kids with a DW acct I'd memory this like whoa!