He waits for a murmured warning, the quiet growl of his name Adam uses like a leash to control him. I love this bit. Also the idea that Adam has been doing his best to keep it under control. But when the levee breaks - oh boy!
Sometimes when a fic finishes on an unknown it gives me a bit of a downer but I liked this. Tommy's determination was positive and felt good. The ending totally fits in with the idea that Adam has been trying to hold back. It wouldn't be realistic to assume that they are now automatically in a relationship, especially considering they haven't actually talked about anything.
I loved the spaced out feel of the first section. So makes me want to try shotgunning though!!
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Date: 2010-09-29 12:05 am (UTC)Sometimes when a fic finishes on an unknown it gives me a bit of a downer but I liked this. Tommy's determination was positive and felt good. The ending totally fits in with the idea that Adam has been trying to hold back. It wouldn't be realistic to assume that they are now automatically in a relationship, especially considering they haven't actually talked about anything.
I loved the spaced out feel of the first section. So makes me want to try shotgunning though!!