Honestly this fic has left me speechless. There's so much I could say, so many parts I absolutely LOVE, that I don't know where to begin. My comment would be as long as your fic if I listed each one. "Well now I'm gonna say no, 'cause you're threatening to sue my ass." That line said SO much, and the sexual tension unfolded! :)
Your word usage is perfect...creative, witty, it flows so smoothly, it's surprising and caught me off guard at times. Adam's character is so true to how I think of him. Tommy's character is probably more assertive than I've seen him, yet I can imagine him being this motivated to express and capture Adam's love for him.
I've read it twice, have recommended it to many Lambliff fic fans, and have bookmarked it so I can go back to it again and again. Thank you for taking this on. You did an amazing job. I hope you'll do more fic with this pairing! Please! :)
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Date: 2010-09-06 05:26 pm (UTC)Your word usage is perfect...creative, witty, it flows so smoothly, it's surprising and caught me off guard at times. Adam's character is so true to how I think of him. Tommy's character is probably more assertive than I've seen him, yet I can imagine him being this motivated to express and capture Adam's love for him.
I've read it twice, have recommended it to many Lambliff fic fans, and have bookmarked it so I can go back to it again and again. Thank you for taking this on. You did an amazing job. I hope you'll do more fic with this pairing! Please! :)