Love the way you made this totally full of their mutual issues and played on that, layering and escalating the different aspects of love/need/focus. Many great lines and moments, like: The thick scent of his lust for power smells the same as every other lust Logan's ever had his faced rubbed in and the reaction of the others people to Daken - and the contrast between Daken and Wolverine. Logan here opened himself up to Daken's use and maybe that's love; maybe he'd have done it all even if Daken hadn't been playing with pheromones, even if Daken's powers of corruption weren't contagious.
The way his son's face twists in furious pleasure cleaves onto his soul, leaves it blackened and hungry for just one more taste.
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Date: 2010-09-17 02:39 am (UTC)The way his son's face twists in furious pleasure cleaves onto his soul, leaves it blackened and hungry for just one more taste.
dangerously, spitefully beautiful - yes.