I- I almost didn't read this! Even though I sometimes read Tony/Steve for no good reason! WHY, SWORDAGE, WHY DID YOU ALMOST NOT READ THIS. Everything about it is perfect - I love how fully your Tony reacts to everything, whether it's by ignoring it completely or by jumping in full-steam. I actually have to run to class in five minutes so real quick: I love that you write sex like actual sex, not some idealized substitution. I love Steve throwing the condom at Tony just to snap him out of it. I love Dummy not-dusting Tony. I adore (and I know this is a throwaway line and totally not the point here but, you know, robot fancier and all) the bit at the beginning with Jarvis had become more a part of him than the house since completion of the Mark II, and didn't give a shit about his music, anyway. That made me ridiculously, completely happy. ♥
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Date: 2010-01-07 11:29 am (UTC)