WOW. I seriously can't believe how well you captured Peter's voice. I could actually hear Joshua Jackson saying these lines. You have serious talent. And that's not even mentioning that this is one of the hottest fanfics that I've ever read, from any show. Are you a professional writer? You should be.
Floored.
Date: 2010-06-04 06:50 pm (UTC)PS - creative commons - yay!